September 2010

Point of View – Third Person POV – I Don’t Know Is on Third

September 27, 2010

My head is full of thoughts, notions, ideas, and impressions.  Sometimes a single one of these coalesces into something worthwhile.  Other times, they carom off each other and keep me awake.  But their my thoughts and only mine.  No one else can know my thoughts.  Except God. As in writing, it’s not always convenient. That’s [...]

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Point of View – Second Person POV – It Really Is All About You

September 20, 2010

Hey, you! A kiosk vendor addressed a woman that way at the mall recently. She ignored him.  Unless that guy needed her to call 9-1-1, it was a rude way for a stranger to approach someone.  Especially when he wanted to sell her perfume.   It was an in-your-face way to communicate. So too, is the [...]

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Point of View – Head Hopping POV – Leave it to the Experts
or Become One

September 13, 2010

Sometimes it seems my husband can read my mind. He’ll bring up a topic that I happen to be thinking about, but hadn’t yet shared.  Hmm.  It makes me wonder if I have one of those thought bubbles above my head. In a novel, when the point of view (POV) character shifts from one person [...]

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Point of View – First Person POV – From My Eyes Only

September 10, 2010

With seven kids to her credit, my mother often heard different versions of the same story–particularly when it involved broken toys, stray animals, or rocks hurtling toward my sister’s head.  When I told my story, I know my version was the most relevant, if not the most reliable.  It was my story with me telling [...]

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Taking Your Shot with an Editor – It’s Up, and It’s Good!

September 6, 2010

“You have to get your feet square and balanced and pointed toward the goal before you take your shot,” explained Coach Rick Torbett. Coach Torbett was talking to basketball players, but I heard his comment and realized the wisdom and application for writers like you and me. Some basketball players are over-eager to shoot for [...]

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It’s Reader Critique Friday! Frivolously Indecisive Blogger

September 3, 2010

This week’s critique I prepared for Heather Condiff, author of the blog FRIVOLOUS INDECISION, who wanted some help with her elevator pitch. Much like Heather, the pitch itself has nice energy to it that buoys the reader. She’s a busy woman with lots of responsibilities and a desire to keep her life balanced with the [...]

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